As I've hinted around to a few people, here is my redesigned original character, Endri. From now on, this is (ideally) what he will look like, and who he will be. I hope everyone will enjoy the changes!
EDIT : I've removed some info on Endri because I'm not sure if it was what I really wanted displayed. I thought I was done revising him (and others as well), but I don't think I am yet. I've left only the information that will probably never change.
Endriði "The Viking" Timbürland [pronounced En-dri-thi (short i) / Tim-bour-land]
Age: 645 (as of Nov 2008)
Date of Birth: November 20, 1363
Date of Death: May 13, 1364
Height: 6'
Weight: 190 lbs
Hair: Blonde, mid-back length
Eyes: Green
Status: Dead (Ghost)
Job: Whatever he can get to make money, but prefers Bodyguard
Favorite Color: Blue/grey
Favorite Food: Teriyaki Chicken & Fried Rice
Place of Origin: Viking village in present day Connecticut
Distinguishing Characteristics: Symbolic Viking tattoo on upper right arm, Viking runic ring, Viking eagle necklace with wolf head terminals (usually hidden under shirt), black sunglasses, pointed ears, ambidextrous
Relations: Beetlejuice (father); Kyle (working partner and best friend); Lydia (sisterly friend); Jacques (polite friend); Ginger (polite friend); MATS & Poopsie (polite friends); Bee & Gnat Juice (grandparents); Donny Juice (uncle); Percy (pet)
Character & Personality :
Endri likes to keep to himself and is very tight-lipped about his past and does not like to discuss it for many different reasons. He generally doesn't like it when people touch him, and he spends long hours by himself either exercising or training his powers. He tends to alienate himself from his father, Beetlejuice, and would rather not associate with him too often as he is embarrassed and disgusted by him.
Since Endri is a Corporeal Ghost from Earth, he is physically different from ghosts of the Neitherworld. His skin tone is deathly, but not verging on lavender like his father's. He is also different internally, which is a big compensation for his large energy requirements.
Endri is a very grounded individual. He prefers the Earth over the Neitherworld, and he's very proud of his Viking heritage. He will occasionally drink when he feels like it, and has been known to make his own mead (a kind of beer made from honey). He is also known to smoke cigarettes, though only when feeling anxiety, so it's a rarity.
Added Tidbit - Differences in the Old & New Design :
Starting from the ground up, so to speak, one of the most noticeable differences between the old and new design for Endri is his flesh tone (old: lavender-colored/new: pale). The reasoning for the color change was to differentiate him in a more extreme way from other ghosts from the Neitherworld (and his father). Since he is from Earth, not the Neitherworld, he has developed in a very different way. His color palette is composed of mostly earth-tones.
Endri also now has a tattoo on his upper right arm. It is of Viking nature and symbolic of all Endri is.
The beetle necklace that was given to Endri by his mother is no more. Instead he wears his own necklace which is a Viking representation of a bird of prey (eagle). He also wears a Viking runic ring. They are two of his very few personal possessions. The eagle was designed after actual Viking artifacts discovered in digs. The ring is more modern.
Another large change in his character is the removal of the influence of the Japanese culture on himself and his language. Instead, he falls back on his own cultural heritage.
Most importantly, there has been layers upon layers of detail added to the character that were not even conceptualized when he was first created. Does he use weapons? Where does he carry them? How do those pouches on his thighs stay up? Are those pirate boots? All of those issues have been addressed and resolved, as seen in the character profile image.
Not to nitpick, or reveal the fact that I've read every one of your fics I could find, before I review them... But doesn't he speak Japanese as well? With a vengeance? As for the pic... Very, very nice. Seems strange to me, that we can see his belly button, even with the shirt on, but then, I don't see many of Endri's build irl. He is VERY nice. I love how well you did this... The jeans look very realistic. Well, to me. In other words... Wow.
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I think I'd rather fall in a dream, than fly. Flying takes too much work. Always trying to fight gravity. Free-fall on the other hand, is amazing... And personally, I never really worry about hitting the ground. I'm surprisingly light on my feet.- me
Actually, the entire Japanese plot line—that Endri's been there, speaks the language, uses it in regular conversation—has been removed from not only him, but the stories as well. Or it WILL be removed from the stories when the revisions are complete. The only languages he speaks are listed in the bio. And the language that he uses in regular conversation is Icelandic. Sorry for that confusion, but I wasn't sure where to put that particular bit of info.
Hmmm... So we're talking real changes, huh? I mean, severe? Looking forward to seeing what you can cook up then... Are you posting in on fanfiction.net?
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I think I'd rather fall in a dream, than fly. Flying takes too much work. Always trying to fight gravity. Free-fall on the other hand, is amazing... And personally, I never really worry about hitting the ground. I'm surprisingly light on my feet.- me
Yes, when I get the revisions finished, I'll be posting the stories there. But I'll be a while though.
Not sure what you mean by severe changes though. There will be different events that take place in the stories because of character improvements and better ideas. But I'm not sure it's "severe".
Cool ^^. I really need to get back to reading these fics. Though should I wait until it's revised and just start over? Anyway, *drool* Endri is so very pretty ^^.
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I think I'd rather fall in a dream, than fly. Flying takes too much work. Always trying to fight gravity. Free-fall on the other hand, is amazing... And personally, I never really worry about hitting the ground. I'm surprisingly light on my feet.- me
His shirt is also very stretchy.
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I think I'd rather fall in a dream, than fly. Flying takes too much work. Always trying to fight gravity. Free-fall on the other hand, is amazing... And personally, I never really worry about hitting the ground. I'm surprisingly light on my feet.- me
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The five coolest guys ever...
1.) Thrax from Osmosis Jones
2.) Vegeta from DBZ
3.) Kyle from Spencers13
4.) Endri from Spencers13
5.) Jareth from Labyrinth
Not sure what you mean by severe changes though. There will be different events that take place in the stories because of character improvements and better ideas. But I'm not sure it's "severe".
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